critiques welcome — before, during, and after publication

in response to marty’s second attempt at writing sy fy: you gots to kick it up a notch (and tell mikey when you see him, “boxes” was cool, but he should have shaved only half of his mustache.)

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my rewrite of marty’s lame sy fy story— soaree, marty.

“alexi loved her smart ass home phone, it was a landline with a pig tail cord nine miles long.”